Salam 3lykm
This is the very first poem I changed my 'writing style' with; takes me down memory lane, so I don't want to read it myself, lol. Just wanted to keep everything I've written together. It made me smile...seeing something from my 'teens', lol! I sound like a 40 year old right now. x'D
12th Jan, 2007
im back wit a new 1...thought of tha beginnin 2day aftr fajr wen i cudnt fall asleep...n wrote it wen i woke up round 1030am...u will notice...im playin around wit a new style...so if this 1 sucks..gimme a break! first tym wit this style...feeel absolutely freeee 2 comment!
It's your love that makes me glow
everything seems alright
all those tears have ceased to flow
n I can sleep through tha night
My love for you caused this heartache
the parting I couldn't bear
even though I walked around wide awake
I was never really here
I thought it would have been easy
I'd forget in a couple of days...
I've never been so wrong in my life's entirety
It was impossible to go separate ways
You have held captive both my heart & soul
so before you decide 2 walk away
remember, without u I will never be whole
in love with u I will forever stay
Wes Salam 3lykm w R7matullahi T3ala w Barkateh
3 comments:
Mashallah nice poem, loved it Um3awas, great writing as usual ^_^
That feeling only lasted a few days..that happiness, that glow. Took it away with my heart & soul when he walked out of my life for the last time.
Something tht barely lasted a month has screwed me over for a lifetime.=/
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