Tuesday, March 16, 2010

The Legal Bond - Part 2 ;)

Salam 3lykm

Remember 'The Legal Bond'? You don't? (Shame on you!=.=)
Lemme refresh your memory then (A) :P

The Legal Bond

Pools of honey,
Framed by upturned drapes of silk;
Hills small and rosy,
Surrounded by a frozen body of milk.

Rosy riverbanks,
Protecting long-hardened snow
Beauty for which a man thanks,
He who did Bestow...

Emeralds that sparkle,
Rain-kissed locks that flow;
Fiery cheekbones that startle,
Milky complexion aglow.

Well-defined jaw-line,
Beautified by a lush beard;
Pearls of perspiration a-shine,
Full lips...so clear.

...As the ink stains paper,
A contract's being signed;
Solid evidence for later,
Hearts & Souls legally intertwined.

I know...*siiigh* :P We'll all get our 'legal bonds' writ in due time, Inshalla!\o/ xD

Well, one of my first assignments was to write a descriptive essay, and knowing how I'm so preoccupied with one thought, I decided to take up the challenge of writing it out of my own poem. Wasn't really a challenge; more like a heart-tugging ordeal!:P Needless to say, this essay got an A. (A) ;D I didn't change the title, of course..I dedicate this to Miss 'Zaini' ;D love ya babe!<3>

Freshly-cut grass glistened under the moonlight, a tell-tale sign it had rained yet once again. No one could have guessed that it was only a few hours ago, that two strangers had vowed to share their lives with each other. Burn-out marks adorned the driveway, where the groom’s brother decided to add some more noise that would temporarily ring in the ears of startled guests, long after the newlyweds had been driven off to the airport, to commence their long-awaited honeymoon.


Little did the newlyweds know that April showers might threaten to ruin the celebration of a lifetime. It was for that reason that everyone had to be ushered into the house once again, tickled with happiness at the joyous event. Young girls twittered gleefully in their matching frocks and boys complained about being suited up in tuxedos, as their mothers looked on over them anxiously, assuring they stayed clean. Young men and women followed in suit, keeping their gazes floored, not only to avoid any awkwardness during accidental eye-contact with each other, but also to avoid the piercing glares of their elders who watched over them like hawks.

Once indoors, quietening the excited guests down proved to be quite a challenge. Impatient with anticipation, some of them also tried to get to the room where the official ceremony was about to take place. However, adhering strictly to their religion, the two families had decided that the bride would only be shown to the female guests, thus abandoning the tradition of seating the newlyweds on a decorated stage. Suddenly aware of the sound system’s final adjustments, their chaotic demeanor was gradually transformed. As the scholar began speaking into the microphone, their murmurs died down, and pin-drop silence prevailed.

The scene was picture-perfect: never had there been such a beautiful couple before. The match looked like it had definitely been made in heaven. Pools of honey, framed by long, silken eyelashes, threatened to betray the bride’s nervousness, as she hung her head down low shyly. Her cheeks were flushed by the sudden, short burst of activity that had taken place, all thanks to the usually-welcomed April showers. As the scholar asked her husband whether he would take her as his life partner, she raised her head slightly, biting nervously on her trembling, rosy lips.

As he took the pen in his hands, she could not help noticing the agile, yet graceful strokes with which he solemnized his vows. His grip was steady, but she could see the pearls of perspiration that shone above his lips. As she watched on, he nervously ran his fingers through his lush beard, which embellished his well-defined jaw-line. His fierce cheekbones went ablaze, creating a startling contrast against his glowing, milky complexion. She stifled a smile that played upon her lips, displaying a perfect array of pearly-whites. Putting the pen down, he slowly lifted his head up to meet her gaze.

She gasped as the pair of intense emeralds looked back at her. Framed by rain-kissed locks of ebony, his illuminated face forced her gaze back down, as a blush crept up her cheeks. As the certificate was passed onto her after she had verbally agreed to the holy matrimony, she tried to secure her grip on the pen, hands trembling like a leaf. A tear escaped her eye, rolling down like a magnificent pearl, its rebellion being met with a hastened demise. She blinked away many tears that followed in suit, only to meet a dire consequence for straying away.

As the ink stained paper, it took her husband a lot of self-restraint to avoid getting up, and taking her into his arms. Dew glistened on roses so crimson, that even blood would shy away in comparison. It was only as the pen made its last mark that she realized, the deed lying in front of her – beautified by their contrasting signatures – was solid evidence for later, that their hearts and souls had legally intertwined.


7 comments:

YAZ said...

Amazing, beautifully written masha2Allah, seriously u should consider writing a novel or something, however I hope actual marriages hve such a poetic gesture in reality :P

maakhi said...

the piece is magical.i got so emotional while reading it.

i second YAZ.. u should definitely think about writing 'Islamic Romance'.. just start writing a novel and keep posting it on your blog in lil parts as they are written and not before long you'll have a wonderful piece. im sure it will be best seller in the muslim world. our very own muslim judith mgnaught.

MIB said...

YAZ: Lol..I started something like that..but I put it on hold for now. Plus it wasn't really Islamic..just '5leeji'. Thanx for the comment, hon! =D

maakhi: Awww..=$ I'll think about it..writing is very inspirational-based; unless I'm inspired, I can't write to save my life!xD Besides..when my bros make fun of what I write, I get irritated. Just kills the 'writer' in me, and I'm going thru that right now! Anyway, very uplifting words, sweets..thanx!<3

YAZ said...

True love in islam can already be seen exemplified in the Prophet's peace be upon him treatment to his wives, especially the stories of Khadeeja and Aisha (radya allahu 3anhuma). However, it is this "real" love that we are missing in our modern times, and reading Um3eesa's piece, it became something like a dream, that our youth are longing for, the line "The match looked like it had definitely been made in heaven." actually caught my attention, and I wonder is it the appearance and the whole setup or scene "picture-perfect" image that we are targeting, or is it the "true" essence of marriage, (of ra7ma and mawada) and bearing the consequences and responsibilites of this legal bond that we should preferably aim for, and work harder on achieving.Are we grasping after all the "true" spirit of love in islam?

MIB said...

YAZ: good point made..but it had to be a descriptive piece, hon..fa that's why there's the portrayal of a 'picture-perfect' image.

No doubt, marriage is not a bed of roses. There are compromises that have to be made; sacrifices...ups and downs.

The 'romance' part comes in where unfortunately, I've seen that despite 'following the Sharee3a', the guy forgets the saying of Rasulullah: إن من أكمل المؤمنين إيمانا أحسنهم خلقا و ألطفهم بأهله

Instead, he becomes mutashadded 3lyhm; 8asy al 8alb..to the point where the kids hide from their own father - instead of happily running out to greet him - when he comes home.

Men just tend to remember الرجال قوامون على النساء ...VERY rarely have I seen mtdayyeneen who actually follow in the footsteps of Rasulullah صلى الله عليه و سلم lil2asaf eshadeed. They think 'romance' shouldn't be part of their married lives; it's imitating the Kuffaar.

Of course, with girlfriends, it's a totally different story. Which is what is really saddening...they treat their gfs like a princess, and their wife like a slave.

Again, I'm not generalizing all the metdayneen..but this is just from what I've seen around me in my life. Typically, separation and divorce have engulfed our society, and I'm guessing most of our generation is exposed to hellish marriages around them. And I definitely don't want my married life to be that way..which is where the 'daydreaming' aspect comes in..we want to do things differently, Inshalla.=)

YAZ said...

sorry I guess i forgot that the essay was an assignment :P, but your arguement is very valid...I think one of the problems, that might be a reason for this high percentage of divorce or unhappy and miserable marriages, is that both the men and women are not fulfilling their roles properly as per sharee3a, and the thing u brought up about men only remembering: الرجال قوامون علي النساء
is so true, however, I wish if they really understand the meaning ofقوامة
which involves:
مُروءة، نٌبل، ثبات، صدق، حزم وعفاف
And by حزم we don't mean violence and aggressiveness however, standing out and being strong in maintaining the limits that Allah bestowed upon us.

I ask Allah to bless u (and all the single sisters out there)with a رجل صالح and u and your husband b role models to your sons and daughters and the generations to come, with your house full of peace and happiness :)

MIB said...

YAZ: Ameen..yzach Allah kil5ayr fdnya wl a5ira, sis =)